https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/zgKMBw

Hi

I would suggest thinking about getting rid of the abbreviations for FM and RA on this page and just spelling those out all the way through

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/hofNAQ

• Emily

Emily Eisbruch, Work Group Lead, Trust and Identity
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From: David Walker
Sent: Thursday, May 10, 2018 12:02 PM
To: Nick Roy; Dean Woodbeck; Ann West; Tom Barton; John Krienke; Angi Sizemore; Emily Eisbruch
Cc: David Walker
Subject: The promised backlog

Everyone,

As promised, here's a backlog of content reviews for the InCommon Federation wiki space. There are a number of them (though some very small), so I've divided them into two groups with staggered due dates for your feedback. Of course, you're welcome to get everything out of the way in one shot.

Responses by Thursday, 5/17
    Review - Federation Services (This is the one I sent out last week.  Thanks to those of you who have already responded.)
    Review - Federation Technical Guide
    Review - How-to articles
    Review - Identity and Access Management
    Review - Initiatives 
Responses by  Tuesday, 5/22
    Review - Metadata Administration
    Review - Recommended Practices
    Review - SAML 

Ann has suggested getting community feedback on what we're doing here. I wouldn't want to do a general solicitation until the end (early-mid June?), as the links among pages don't stay within specific sections, so people will be reviewing pages we haven't gotten to yet. We could, though, add some new-to-InCommon people to these section-focused (and time-bounded) requests for feedback. Do any of you have thoughts of who we could invite?

As always, thanks for putting time into this.

David

On 05/02/2018 03:27 PM, Nick Roy wrote:

Hi David, I'll try to get to these reviews yet this week.

Nick

On 5/2/18 12:06 AM, David Walker wrote:

FYI, I've finished revising the eduGAIN
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN and
Federation Manager
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Manager
sections the InCommon Federation wiki space. Notes are in Review -
eduGAIN https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw and Review - Federation
Manager https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/gQeMBw.

I've also reviewed the Federation Services
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Services
section; proposed changes and a couple of questions in red are in
Review - Federation Services
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Federation+Services.
I realize you've got Global Summit coming up, but if you can take a look
before you leave for San Diego, I could make the revisions next week.
In any event, I'll keep reviewing more sections next week, so expect a
backlog.

David

On 04/27/2018 03:56 PM, Dean Woodbeck wrote:

I finished reviewing this, too. FWIW, I agree with gutting the eduGAIN section, too. I think someone with the technical knowledge could probably shorten the delegated admin stuff, but I'm not that guy. > > Dean > > On 4/27/18, 5:48 PM, "Nick Roy" [email protected]
wrote: >
I've put comments on the review pages, also I agree with gutting the
eduGAIN section.

Best,

Nick

On 4/27/18 10:55 AM, David Walker wrote:

I'm going to give you all some more time to review what I plan to
do for the eduGAIN
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN and
Federation Manager
<https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Manager
sections the InCommon Federation wiki space, as I need input on a number
of questions, which I have now highlighted in bold red in:

• Review - eduGAIN https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw and
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw * Review - Federation
  Manager https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/gQeMBw
  Note also that I'm proposing to gut eduGAIN
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN,
  moving only a few of its pages into the Metadata Administration
  section and deprecating the rest (but leaving for historical
  interest), as the bulk of that section is about the project to
  integrate eduGAIN into InCommon.
  Is Tuesday too soon for responses?
  David
  >

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/-IKVAQ

1. Style is kinda strange, but can leave alone.
2. Move "info for IdPs" and "info for SPs" links to their own section; don't use info boxes.

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/9QE7BQ

I've reviewed all of this and left comments at the bottom of each page.
Let me know if I was incoherent :-)

There is one issue (the deployment checklist for IdPs) that I did not
have time to look at. There is another page somewhere called 'new IdPs
in metadata' that you should look at and see if you think these things
can be deduped. New IdPs in metadata is a good/up-to-date document but
doesn't necessarily cover things exhaustively.

Nick

On 5/10/18 10:02 AM, David Walker wrote:

Everyone,

As promised, here's a backlog of content reviews for the InCommon
Federation wiki space. There are a number of them (though some very
small), so I've divided them into two groups with staggered due dates
for your feedback. Of course, you're welcome to get everything out of
the way in one shot.

• Responses by Thursday, 5/17
  o Review - Federation Services
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Federation+Services
  (This is the one I sent out last week. Thanks to those of you
  who have already responded.)
  o Review - Federation Technical Guide
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Federation+Technical+Guide

  o Review - How-to articles
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+How-to+articles

  o Review - Identity and Access Management
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Identity+and+Access+Management

  o Review - Initiatives
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Initiatives

• Responses by Tuesday, 5/22
  o Review - Metadata Administration
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Metadata+Administration

  o Review - Recommended Practices
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Recommended+Practices

  o Review - SAML
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+SAML

Ann has suggested getting community feedback on what we're doing here.
I wouldn't want to do a general solicitation until the end (early-mid
June?), as the links among pages don't stay within specific sections, so
people will be reviewing pages we haven't gotten to yet. We could,
though, add some new-to-InCommon people to these section-focused (and
time-bounded) requests for feedback. Do any of you have thoughts of who
we could invite?

As always, thanks for putting time into this.

David

On 05/02/2018 03:27 PM, Nick Roy wrote:

Hi David, I'll try to get to these reviews yet this week.

Nick

On 5/2/18 12:06 AM, David Walker wrote:

FYI, I've finished revising the eduGAIN
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN and
Federation Manager
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Manager
sections the InCommon Federation wiki space. Notes are in Review -
eduGAINhttps://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw and Review - Federation
Managerhttps://spaces.internet2.edu/x/gQeMBw.

I've also reviewed the Federation Services
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Services
section; proposed changes and a couple of questions in red are in
Review - Federation Services
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/%[email protected]/Review+-+Federation+Services.
I realize you've got Global Summit coming up, but if you can take a look
before you leave for San Diego, I could make the revisions next week.
In any event, I'll keep reviewing more sections next week, so expect a
backlog.

David

On 04/27/2018 03:56 PM, Dean Woodbeck wrote:

I finished reviewing this, too. FWIW, I agree with gutting the eduGAIN section, too. I think someone with the technical knowledge could probably shorten the delegated admin stuff, but I'm not that guy. > > Dean > > On 4/27/18, 5:48 PM, "Nick Roy"[email protected]
wrote: >
I've put comments on the review pages, also I agree with gutting the
eduGAIN section.

Best,

Nick

On 4/27/18 10:55 AM, David Walker wrote:

I'm going to give you all some more time to review what I plan to
do for the eduGAIN
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN and
Federation Manager
<https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/Federation+Manager

sections the InCommon Federation wiki space, as I need input on a number

of questions, which I have now highlighted in bold red in:

• Review - eduGAINhttps://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw and
  https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aweMBw * Review - Federation
  Managerhttps://spaces.internet2.edu/x/gQeMBw

Note also that I'm proposing to gut eduGAIN
https://spaces.internet2.edu/display/InCFederation/eduGAIN,
moving only a few of its pages into the Metadata Administration
section and deprecating the rest (but leaving for historical
interest), as the bulk of that section is about the project to
integrate eduGAIN into InCommon.
Is Tuesday too soon for responses?
David

 >

Persistent Identifier Support

Participant Operational Practices

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/Z4AXAQ

Several of the H3 headers in this Document (like "Federated User Experience") are links to a different wiki page. However this is not made clear, as there is text below that also covers the topic. If we want the reader to realize there may be additional information by clicking the link we need to tell them that explicitly rather than hoping they will figure it out.

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/-oKVAQ

Are there pages for the CM? The Identity and Access Management page is currently a child of Federation Manager.

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/BoOVAQ

Says attributes can be released either locally (InCommon?) or globally.

https://www.incommon.org/docs/InCommonBasicsandResources.pdf

Subject: Re: InCommon Federation wiki space - eduGAIN and Federation Manager
Date: Fri, 27 Apr 2018 15:56:21 -0700
From: Dean Woodbeck [email protected]
To: Nick Roy [email protected], David Walker [email protected], Ann West [email protected], Tom Barton [email protected], John Krienke [email protected], Angi Sizemore [email protected], Emily Eisbruch [email protected]

I finished reviewing this, too. FWIW, I agree with gutting the eduGAIN section, too. I think someone with the technical knowledge could probably shorten the delegated admin stuff, but I'm not that guy.

Dean

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https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/aAbvAQ

Explain why it's needed to review requirements for SPs
Remove first step to browse list of R&S SPs

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/6YD4Ag

1. It says it's under review. That's not true, is it?
2. There's a lot in there about why a site might want to hide its IdP, but InCommon settting it is at InCommon's discretion. We should add something about why InCommon would do that.
3. It defines "discoverable" IdPs. Do we need that? "Should be discoverable" is really what's being meant here, I think.

https://spaces.internet2.edu/x/bInwAg

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