Didn't press spacebar, scrolled down immediately. JBS felt the spacebar thing should me much more eye-catching JBS commented that the flow could be optimised (but we know that's gonna need loads of tweaking) The line about education didn't feel relevant JBS didn't know what to do at the end of the story technology | commercial | business - looks like links to scroll down the page

I think I should change "small" to "little" so that it's not compared with "big"

JBS felt that the text / claims need more backing & numbers to prove my ability. Specifically: starting tech companies (companies started), speaking engagements (videos or list of talks), business consultancy (what type?) Overall, JBS wants more of the website to jump out at him. He wants easter eggs and gifts and wow/pazazz, etc

First line (press spacebar to continue) should fade in or show interactivity/animation The first line is too small, the rest are too large.. get them both in the middle From "yes I coded this animation myself", it sounds kinda pretentious, and the story frazzles out for all future lines from there.

• Up the font weight and text size
• Awwwards color palette for the four circles
• Title text: font size and thickness increase
• Decrease top&bottom section margin by 1/3
• Show that I am validated to speak on these things at this level because x, y, and z

Who am I? I don't believe in namedropping, just damn good quality with smart people Reputation on what I did for other people

Go back to your mantras. You know, "open every door and go down the path of least resistance", "the theory of relative success", "no one knows anything about anything", "It's not about achieving your goal, it's about enjoying the journey"

###Testimonials in the making People to ask:

• Stefano, Founder and CEO of Nucco Brian
• Ekaterina, Founder of Amolingua
• Gary, CEO(?) of Mentoring Britain
• Al, (website client), founder of Polar Create
• Umesh (Hackathon Mentoring), founder of Pace Ventures Hey Umesh, I'm just working on a personal website right now and I'm wondering if you have any kind words you're willing to share around hackathon mentoring. Alternatively, if you'd prefer to say something with some more depth, I'd be interested to help out on a side project with Pace so you're able to capture my skills.
• Joaquim, founder of MVPLab
• Nina, JellyBee films
• Alex, Chief Product Officer of Kurv.io
• Gabriel, founder of Startup Insights
• Jon, Founder of Tech London Slack
• Tom OR Leigh, cofounder of SSG
• Someone from Plexal?
• Daniel, Grant Tree?
• Stuart?
• Fionn?
• Patrick?
• Work with Kwamz?
• Work with Stephen C? Need more:
• Hard numbers on how I changed companies

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